[drabble] For the first time
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haraamiso.O More fic. Well, drabble actually but still... I haven't written this much in more than two years, I'd say.
Not to mention the irony of posting incest fiction right after the big drama in which said topic played no little role.*cough*
But who am I to ignore a prompt that appeals to me. :P
For the First Time
Pairing: Zechs/Relena
Prompt: First times
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: incest, het, smut, romance
Disclaimer: don’t own, just play
Notes: written for the GW kink meme
Thanks to![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-userinfo.gif)
kedriaa for the quick beta. <3
He remembers her first cry, although only vaguely, for he was barely 4 years old himself. Waiting in front of the closed doors where he was sent while his mother was giving birth, he was startled from dark reveries by the painful moans of his mother and then, suddenly, a high-pitched scream. He wasn’t very impressed with the red-faced, hairless little bundle when she was brought out.
He was placated when she smiled at him for the first time, grabbing at his finger with her chubby, little hand and holding unto it as if she’d never let go again. He was positively enamoured when her first word was “mimi”.
Pride swelled in his chest when she pulled herself up, clutching his leg, and stood on her own feet for the first time. He guarded her with fierce dedication when she took her first steps, blaming himself every time he couldn’t catch her and keep her from falling.
He wasn’t there to teach her how to ride a bike. He wasn’t there on her first day of school. He didn’t sweep her through the ballroom in her first dance, and it wasn’t him who stole her first kiss. He wasn’t there when for the first time, she fell in love.
His baby sister has grown up and he’s missed most of it. Never again, he’s promised himself.
So now he’s here, braced above her, her cheeks flushed a lovely pink and her lips swollen from relentless kissing. Her eyes are shining with desire, anticipation, and a hint of nervousness. They are both panting, aware of the gravity of the moment, and prolonging the sweet torment of waiting for just a few more moments.
He looks down into her face as her fists clench in his hair and draw him into a gentle kiss. Her legs wrap around his hips and she presses upwards in encouragement, the wetness of her brushing against his skin. It breaks his resolve. Locking eyes with her, he finally pushes in, slowly, carefully. He meets resistance and pain flickers across her face. His cock throbs and he groans with the exhilarating knowledge that this time, he’s first.
He knows that hurting her is inevitable, so he does it in one quick thrust. A choked gasp escapes her and he bends down to lick away the tear that trickles from the corner of her eye. His eyes close and his muscles strain with the effort of keeping still, waiting for her to adjust. She’s feels so hot, so tight, so good.
Again, a tug on his hair pulls him back, and he finds her looking up at him with a watery smile. “Move, Milliardo,” she urges him on, and he nearly comes undone. He’s more skilled than that, though. Soon she’s crying out with his thrusts and he knows it’s not from pain.
He watches her as she’s nearing the edge, enraptured, while his own body feels like it’s on fire. He pushes and she falls, the image of her as she comes firmly engraved in his mind, before he hotly spills himself inside her for the first time.
Not to mention the irony of posting incest fiction right after the big drama in which said topic played no little role.*cough*
But who am I to ignore a prompt that appeals to me. :P
For the First Time
Pairing: Zechs/Relena
Prompt: First times
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: incest, het, smut, romance
Disclaimer: don’t own, just play
Notes: written for the GW kink meme
Thanks to
kedriaa for the quick beta. <3 He remembers her first cry, although only vaguely, for he was barely 4 years old himself. Waiting in front of the closed doors where he was sent while his mother was giving birth, he was startled from dark reveries by the painful moans of his mother and then, suddenly, a high-pitched scream. He wasn’t very impressed with the red-faced, hairless little bundle when she was brought out.
He was placated when she smiled at him for the first time, grabbing at his finger with her chubby, little hand and holding unto it as if she’d never let go again. He was positively enamoured when her first word was “mimi”.
Pride swelled in his chest when she pulled herself up, clutching his leg, and stood on her own feet for the first time. He guarded her with fierce dedication when she took her first steps, blaming himself every time he couldn’t catch her and keep her from falling.
He wasn’t there to teach her how to ride a bike. He wasn’t there on her first day of school. He didn’t sweep her through the ballroom in her first dance, and it wasn’t him who stole her first kiss. He wasn’t there when for the first time, she fell in love.
His baby sister has grown up and he’s missed most of it. Never again, he’s promised himself.
So now he’s here, braced above her, her cheeks flushed a lovely pink and her lips swollen from relentless kissing. Her eyes are shining with desire, anticipation, and a hint of nervousness. They are both panting, aware of the gravity of the moment, and prolonging the sweet torment of waiting for just a few more moments.
He looks down into her face as her fists clench in his hair and draw him into a gentle kiss. Her legs wrap around his hips and she presses upwards in encouragement, the wetness of her brushing against his skin. It breaks his resolve. Locking eyes with her, he finally pushes in, slowly, carefully. He meets resistance and pain flickers across her face. His cock throbs and he groans with the exhilarating knowledge that this time, he’s first.
He knows that hurting her is inevitable, so he does it in one quick thrust. A choked gasp escapes her and he bends down to lick away the tear that trickles from the corner of her eye. His eyes close and his muscles strain with the effort of keeping still, waiting for her to adjust. She’s feels so hot, so tight, so good.
Again, a tug on his hair pulls him back, and he finds her looking up at him with a watery smile. “Move, Milliardo,” she urges him on, and he nearly comes undone. He’s more skilled than that, though. Soon she’s crying out with his thrusts and he knows it’s not from pain.
He watches her as she’s nearing the edge, enraptured, while his own body feels like it’s on fire. He pushes and she falls, the image of her as she comes firmly engraved in his mind, before he hotly spills himself inside her for the first time.
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Date: Monday, 4 June 2007 10:06 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: Tuesday, 5 June 2007 06:06 am (UTC)no subject
Date: Monday, 4 June 2007 10:13 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: Tuesday, 5 June 2007 06:09 am (UTC)*^__^* It makes me all the more happy you liked it, then. *smooch* Thank you.
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Date: Monday, 4 June 2007 11:18 pm (UTC)The emphasis on being first was well done. Very obsessive Zechs ^_^
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Date: Tuesday, 5 June 2007 06:11 am (UTC)^_^ I'm glad you liked it. Thank you for reading and commenting. ♥
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Date: Monday, 4 June 2007 11:20 pm (UTC)*sends muskrits with chorclates!* ♥
As for the fic itself - this is just gorgeous. I love the evolution of their relationship, all the firsts Zechs had with her and all the ones he didn't, the slow build to this moment... Oh yes.
(Not to take anything away from this, but now Muskrit can't help wondering if you have ever written Conrad/Wolfram? And Muskrit knows she still owes you Wolfram's first kiss... it is in a notebook somewhere, possibly in storage at the moment. Bad Muskrit.
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Date: Tuesday, 5 June 2007 06:27 am (UTC)And I'm so glad you like it. *beams* ♥ The thought of building it up like that kind of triggered the fic and then it just wrote itself.
Conrad/Wolfram *_* Or Conrad/Gwendal. Although I haven't written it (I don't write all that much, to be honest *sweatdrop*) I am very much for the brothercest in KKM. In any combination or with all of them. And I don't mind at all if Yuuri gets thrown in there as well. *smirk*
And Muskrit knows she still owes you Wolfram's first kiss... ♥♥ I'll wait for it as long as it takes, because omg I so wanna see that.
*snuggleloves*
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Date: Tuesday, 5 June 2007 07:36 am (UTC)I don't write all that much, to be honest
That be a darn shame! But I'm even happier now that you got to play a little at the kink meme. *big muskrit grin*
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Date: Tuesday, 5 June 2007 01:00 am (UTC)Nicely written and very hot!! Thank you!! ^^
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Date: Tuesday, 5 June 2007 06:30 am (UTC)Incest is good. (As long as it is consensual, that is. >_>)
*grin* and rewatching GW is always a good thing, too. What do we have the DVDs for, after all. ^_~
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Date: Wednesday, 6 June 2007 03:50 am (UTC)no subject
Date: Wednesday, 6 June 2007 08:41 pm (UTC)BTW do you write this sort of thing easier in English?
Yes, much, much easier. Actually I'm not sure if I /could/ write it like this in German. ^^; Probably has to do with the fact that I read this kind of thing almost exclusively in English as well.
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