That was nicely done. I liked the imagery; you could almost feel the moist air and hear the hail. And that's very darn true about kids... you can wake the little buggers up by whispering too darn loud, but then they can turn around and sleep through something like a thunderstorm! ^o^
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Date: Thursday, 29 September 2005 12:35 pm (UTC)And that's very darn true about kids... you can wake the little buggers up by whispering too darn loud, but then they can turn around and sleep through something like a thunderstorm! ^o^