Please?

[haraamis]

So, um... I have this fic. Like, written. The first part, that is. Part 1 has roughly 3000 words. Picture me puzzled. o.O

'Cause, you know, I usually don't write things longer than mere ficlets. You know that, right? ^^;

Anyway, I'm looking for someone who'd be so kind as to beta it. The reason I'm asking here is that it's Harutoki (harukanaru toki no naka de), and I know that most of you are not familiar with the series. Personally, it doesn't matter to me if you know the series or not, since I'm looking for someone who would check for grammar mistakes, typos, and general writing style. However, I also know that it might be quite boring to read something you're not familiar with. ^^;

Anyway

Title: Merging gold and blue
Series: harukanaru toki no naka de
Pairing: (established) Tenma/Akane, (eventual) Tenma/Akane/Yorihisa
Rating: R/NC-17
Warnings: threesome, smut, het, yaoi, romance
Spoilers: maybe, not the end of the series or something like that, though
Length: Part 1 and 2, roughly 3000 words each (at least that is what is planned ^^;)


Akane


Tenma


Yorihisa




Feel free to ask any questions you might have concerning the series, characters, fic etc.

Also, there is no hurry in doing this as I still have part 2 to write...

So, any takers?

Comments

[nereidaia.livejournal.com]

woah, you finally finished part one?!? lol
I'm probably not the best choice to find grammar mistakes (that's a job for a good native speaker), but I'd look it over for typos and general stuff, if you want me to. Second set of eyes and all that jazz, you know. ^_^

[haraamis.livejournal.com]

>_> shut up. I had to move and stuff! XP

*laughs* Auf jeden Fall, danke fürs Angebot. Ich werd bestimmt darauf zurückkommen.

^^; Und hatte ich dir nicht die Serie versprochen? Hast du die ersten 8 Folgen noch gekriegt?

P.S Mmmmm iconlove...

[nereidaia.livejournal.com]

muahaha, I aim to tease! lol

Ich hab die Folgen 1-8 gesehen, für die anderen hab ich active links von C1 gefunden. Hab die nur grad ein bissel nach hinten gesetzt auf der Prioritätenliste.

[gwy.livejournal.com]

muh ich will die serie sehen, hallo bishis *___*

[haraamis.livejournal.com]

*grins* Gib mir deine Adresse und ich brenn und schick sie dir. ^_~

[gwy.livejournal.com]

sag mir erstmal, was das überhaupt ist und ich les mir ne inhaltsangabe durch ;) Sonst schickst du mir die noch umsonst wenn mir die gar nicht gefällt. Aber ist total lieb von dir *knuddel* *freu*

[gunnm-angel.livejournal.com]

*waves hand frantically* OOOOOH, PICK ME!!! You know I love to beta, and I haven't read anything you've written in quite a long time. I would be most pleased to beta for you! Just email me the ficcie--it might even get me interested in a new series! :3

[haraamis.livejournal.com]

*smooch* Thank you!

I'll send once I have overcome the virus of DOOOOM. -.-

OHH!

[yukari-yuki.livejournal.com]

OHHHH!!! You're writing a fic!!!! And we all know how good you are at those!^_^ If you'd like, I'd be happy to edit it!^_^